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The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 17


               A revolving pop can sporting the words “Gen. Rush” in large blocky letters, trailing flames to give the impression of speed, went blasting across the black void of space on the vast video screen mounted on the side of a building outside and, even though, thankfully, Rachel could hear nothing through the sound-proof pane of the window, the brand theme song was already starting to play in her head.
               "I don't feel very sure of this," said Alice meekly, glancing out from the shadows of her black hood and startling Rachel back into the present.
               "Oh, trust us," said Rachel gaily, giving her a comforting pat on the knee. "David knows what he's doing. Don't you?" She glanced over at him, keeping the look just this side of suggestive with difficulty.
               "Indeed I do, or at least, I know how to get the best people for the job. Money can keep people quiet about the most unusual request." There was silence as all three thought about just how unusual their requests would be this day. When she had told her plan to Dave at their next meeting, just a quick lunch at a bistro downtown, squeezed in between his business appointments, he had agreed to it enthusiastically, called her a genius actually, which she still blushed to remember. It made her feel slightly better that someone, the only person she could talk to about it, since she still hadn’t been able to locate Susan, didn’t think her plan was hopeless. She was starting to become seriously worried about the Susan's continued lack of communication, but appearing too concerned about it would only make her look weak to Elissa so she kept her concerns under wraps as much as possible. Of course, Dave probably wasn’t the expert on how to make something socially acceptable and neither was she but she still appreciated his vote of confidence. Even better, he also was able to come up with practical steps to make her vision a reality, as well as the resources to carry them out, which was fortunate, considering the barriers they would face in order to do so. As if reading her mind, Alice shifted nervously again.
               "It's not like you're the only one in danger," said Rachel. "I think this plan is worth risking my own livelihood for, as well as yours." Alice nodded meekly and hid behind her cowl.
               Dave tapped Rachel on the shoulder and told her to look out the window. "Over there," he said. "That's the rainbow dome I worked on as assistant designer and chemical coordinator." They were in his private transport, floating high over the city and Rachel had to admit the view, both inside and out, was marvelous. But she couldn't properly enjoy it for, despite her words to Alice, she knew the risk she was taking, a fact that neither the panoramic view, nor even Dave's face, could make her completely forget.
               Even at this moment, she was breaking brothel policy in a serious way, or rather, several serious ways. First, was quality control. It was forbidden for hooded new hires to associate with men on anything more than the most casual basis. After all, they couldn't demand money for someone who hadn't been Sacrificed yet, and the thought of allowing a man that much free time with one of her co-workers would make any self-respecting prostitute plunder her emergency stash of Sir Lyronax, tranquility's champion. The brief conversation in Fedallah's had been acceptable, but riding in a man's private saucer and spending several hours in his company was completely out of the question and the only excuse that would have made such prolonged contact acceptable, Dave being Alice's Sacrifice sponsor, was actually true but she had to pretend it wasn't because that would give Elissa insight into her plan, which she could then attempt to sabotage. Therefore, Rachel and Alice had gone "out for a walk in the park," but instead, they had actually met Dave at a prearranged location.
               The first problem led to the second. Since Alice's location had to be concealed, so did Rachel's, as Alice was not allowed out without an escort. Oh, how Rachel wished she could have gotten Susan in on the plan. It would have made things so much easier. But Susan was nowhere to be found. Therefore, Rachel was spending time with Dave for free, which officially constituted robbing the brothel. She could only hope she wasn't recognized by anyone, or, if she were, they wouldn't think the information worth repeating. Small hope of that though since any trip to buy a Sacrifice dress, or a coming out of the closet dress, or any other such outfit, was considered a huge piece of gossip.
               "Where shall we stop first?" asked Rachel, to take her mind off her worries.
              "We should look at fabric first," said Dave, "but I have connections for that." Unlike the others, he did not seem particularly uneasy. He lounged back against the wall of the transport and kept turning a small curiously shaped piece of metal in his hand, which he watched intently. Rachel thought he looked absolutely splendid and feared she would say something stupid. "When are you going on your trip?" she asked.
               "I thought I would leave in the next couple of days, once everything here is set up. That way, you can keep working on things while I'm gone and I'll be back in time to start on the social events."
               "Ohh, I think I'm going to be sick," Alice moaned, clutching her stomach. "I can't do this."
               "But you don't have to do anything," said Rachel with irritation. "That's the point. You just lie there and pretend to be scared."
               "I am scared," Alice cried.
               "Well, that should just make it all the easier then, shouldn't it?" Alice whimpered and then an uncomfortable silence filled the transport. Dave brushed his hair away from his face and turned the metal again, so it flashed in his hand. "That thing looks like a sex toy," Rachel blurted out. Sure enough, she had done something stupid.
               Dave shrugged. "I've seen similar things used that way. But you shouldn't talk about things like that right now. We don't want to corrupt our virgin." Rachel laughed stupidly and Alice looked ill. "This piece here was the result of a failed attempt I made to alter the structure of this type of metal. I kept it because it was interesting."
               "It does look pretty," said Rachel.
               "Here," he tossed it over to her. "You can have it, if you like. I've never used it for anything."
               Rachel caught the object with difficulty in her clumsy hands. It felt very solid and smooth and...it still retained the heat from his hands. Rachel trembled all over and furtively pressed the warm metal against her bare wrist, imagining it was Dave's fingers touching her. "Why are you acting so confident today?" she asked. In a way, she was enjoying this cocky side of him.
              "Because I know I'm doing something useful," he replied. “I often question what the point of anything I do is, beyond serving my own convenience, and, while there's nothing wrong with that, I sometimes wonder if that's all there is." There was a strange look on his face as he said this, as if there was more he was not saying, or what he said was not quite what he meant. "But, right now, I'm doing something that obviously helps someone else, and that makes me feel good."
               "You certainly look like you feel good," she said, then cringed, not realizing how suggestive it sounded until it was too late. Quickly, she turned her attention to Alice and began reminding her of all the new habits she needed to instill in herself. Using his ultra deluxe non-brothel internet package, Dave had been able to locate a document of behavior advice from the era in question, a kind of ancient
Manual of House Pet Behavior, and then use his connections as a Libertus to have a copy of it sent to him. It was hopelessly confusing and much of the advice was impossible to understand, not surprising as it was written with the same strange phrasing and vocabulary as the novel, but she still managed to cobble together quite the list of things that Alice needed to remember to do. She must always keep her eyes down, always speak softly, take small steps, look away from people who approached her, laugh quietly, and cover her mouth while doing so. Rachel was only a quarter of the way through the list when they landed on the loading dock of the large fabric factory, Fabriganza.
               "David, what are you doing here? We didn't send for you." A man with pale hair and a pointed nose came out onto the platform to meet them.
               "No, you didn't, Jake." The two men slapped each other on the back in greeting. "I came here to do some shopping."
               "Shopping? You? For fabric? Come on, Dave. You know I don't get drunk during daylight hours. How could you expect me to believe a story like that?" Then he caught sight of Rachel and Alice. "Women? You brought two women here? You've expanded your horizons since last we met. And a virgin? Are you angling for preferred status at her Sacrifice?"
               Dave grinned back at him. "No, I'm hosting it. We need cloth for her dress."
               "Well, invite me," said Jake excitedly.
               "Of course, of course. But one thing, I would like you to personally conduct all our transactions today and keep secret all information about our visit."
               "Eh? Why?"
              Dave looked at him steadily. "My friend...I will be giving you an invitation," was all he said.
               "Fine. Fine. You were always a weird one anyway." Jake began walking towards the doors. "Follow me."
               "I've worked with that guy a few times," Dave whispered to Rachel. "We can trust him. Plus, he's rich, rich and reckless enough that his involvement will jump start the bidding for sure."
               "Did you know he would want to come?" she whispered back.
               "I suspected, I hoped."
               "You are clever," she said. He smiled with pleasure at her flattery. On the surface, it was an arrogant grin, as if her words were no more than his due. But, underneath, she saw the shy delight of one unused to genuine praise because he received it far too seldom. Both aspects of his personality enchanted her and she suspected, she hoped, he would be just as clever in bed as he was in other ways.
               "What, in particular, are you looking for?" asked Jake, as he led them into the main hall of the warehouse, both sides lined with doors to storage rooms, containing bolts of fabric, sorted by color, texture, weight, chemical composition, and other qualities that were beyond Rachel's comprehension.
              "White, lots of white," said Dave. "In fact, it would probably save time if you showed us nothing but white."
               "White? For a Sacrifice?" Jake looked at him questioningly.
               "See, this is why I need you to keep quiet. This Sacrifice is going to be a little...different than most and we don't want
Gregory's or Calvin's getting wind of our plan and beating us to it."
               "Or
Luther's," Rachel thought to herself. As they were talking, Jake led them all the way down the long hall and through the door at the far end which opened into a series of rooms roofed by glass domes, each divided into aisles by high racks running down the length of the room and these racks were all hung with bolts of cloth.
               "This is our display complex," said Jake, as he guided them through it. "Here we show off fabric for selection by the clothing factories and clothing artists. This is the way people are
supposed to enter." He elbowed Dave pointedly.
               "Hey, I'm an exception. I work here."
               "You may have done special commissions here in the past but, right now, you're in the role of a customer. Oh, here we are at the white fabric." Rachel gasped in wonder at the sight. There was so much white fabric in the room that it looked like the whole place had been buried under drifts of snow as pure as a sponsor could buy. The racks were all colored silver and the light reflected from them and from the white fabric itself so brightly that Rachel had to shield her eyes at first. For one hour and the greater part of a second, they wandered among the racks, feeling the different fabrics and holding them against Alice's skin to get the best match, though the whole process would have been much more enjoyable if Jake had not been almost constantly trying to slip in comments about the amazing technological properties of the cloth, how it was made on the newest model of self-correcting, thermal sensitive ur-loom and was specially treated with some unpronounceable chemical to make it stain resistant despite being white. Rachel made sure they chose the lightest and most airy fabrics, the filmiest gossamers and the most liquid silkones. Jake shook his head in perplexity at her selections but promised they would be promptly delivered to the location of her choice.
               Dave just patted him on the shoulder and said conspiratorially, "Remember, you will be invited and then all your questions will be answered. But, if I were you, I would save up my money. I think you'll want it that night."
               "You were marvelous, David," cried Alice in amazement, when they were back in the transport. "How did you ever manage to do that?"
               "Empathy, the ability to sense the desires of others and respond to them."
               "Oh," said Rachel. "That's how you could tell that the other women don't..." He gave her a sharp look and she realized he didn't want her to talk about his personal issues in front of Alice. She subsided but, as she did so, another thought occurred to her. If he could sense that other women did not desire him, then, maybe, he could also sense that she did. At the thought, she blushed deeply and turned her head away.
               Their next stop was at a firm of clothing artists. Dave knew nothing about women's clothing artists and Rachel did not want to visit anyone she had patronized before for fear of being recognized and word getting back to the brothel, so Dave had asked Jake for recommendations. At Rachel's request he had insisted on being given the name of an artist who focused on experimental fashion, as opposed to one who specialized in Sacrifice dresses for she knew it was almost impossible to induce the self proclaimed “experts” to deviate from their narrowly defined ideas of how such things should be done. Even so, none of them could help feeling quite apprehensive about approaching a total stranger with their unusual requests. In the entryway of the large building Dave pulled out the card Jake had given him to look up the office of their recommendation, Orlav Tier-1-Artist Fashion Brigade Extravaganzus.
              Rachel groaned. “He has a fourth name?” She cried in exasperation. “There's absolutely no way he'll pay attention to anything we say.”
               Dave nodded, his expression tense. “He's located on the second floor in the north hallway just off the main corridor. Suite 28B.” He turned to go without further comment and Rachel followed behind, stewing and fuming about their ill luck. She could only hope Orlav wasn't one of the risk adverse types. 

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  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 1
  •  The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 2
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 3
  •  The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 4 
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 5 
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 6  
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 7 
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 8   
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 9
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 10   
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 11 
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 12 
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 13
  • The Whore of Her-Babylon--chapter 14 
  • The Whore of Her-Babylon--chapter 15 
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