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The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 8

 
               “According to our latest census, the world population has now reached five hundred million,” the cheery voice of the radio announcer proclaimed. “This factoid brought to you courtesy of Deep Tissue Data, also the sponsor of today's sunny spells and scattered showers, with a beautiful rainbow to follow, so you know they always go that extra mile. Now, in more pressing news, a catfight has broken on public transport between members of Smith’s and Hubbard’s.”
               “BS,” said Alice, ignoring the radio, although the catfight did sound like a lot of BS, as she looked at the handful of cards Rachel had just placed between them on the bed. It was one of the last nights of the Holidays and most of the women were off working at the big company parties. Alice was sour about missing all the fun even though, as a virgin who had not yet “come out of the closet” she wouldn't have been able to go anyway, and so Rachel was spending the evening with her to distract her.
              “Are you sure you want to do that?” Rachel gave her a severe look and tucked her hair behind her ear, totally calm.
              “Yea, I'm sure. You've played entirely too many cards. Now show.”
              “Alright, you caught me.” Rachel flipped over her cards and swept them back into her hand. “Now you go.”
              “I think I will, thank you,” Alice replied with exaggerated haughtiness. “Three fours.” She cast down the cards with a toss of her head.
               Rachel gave her a quick look. “You're lying,” she said.
               “Argh!” Alice cried in frustration. “How can you always tell?”
               “Years of practice,” Rachel replied dryly. While Alice was not nearly as bad at cards as she was at sex, she still had a hard time managing in the cut-throat environment of hardened brothel veterans absolutely bored stupid. Well, stupider any way, Rachel though sourly—most of them were already pretty stupid. But among all the card games, BS held a special pride of place, not only because it involved more skill to play than most of the other games, but also because it was considered an important part of honing professional skills as well. It taught one how to carry on a conversation, seemingly unconcerned, while secretly strategizing, how to lie easily and convincingly, and how to read others through voice and gesture to determine their true meaning. Being able to hide your feelings while decoding those of others could provide a huge leg up on the competition.
               “So, what's the trick?” asked Alice as Rachel dropped “four eights,” really two fives, an executive, and a nine.
               “You need to not be so desperate to be believed.”
               “What do you mean?” Alice looked stung.
               “You've learned the physical signs of lying, which is good. For example, that people usually look away slightly. But now you're so concerned with concealing them that you give yourself away by going too far in the other direction. Whenever you lie, you always look me straight in the face to prove you have nothing to hide.” It was rare for a mentor to spell things out in such explicit terms. Usually, girls were expected to learn from watching and doing, speared on by the humiliation of losing game after game. But, as usual, Rachel felt no need to beat around the bush. Not that she was Alice's mentor, of course.
              “But how am I supposed to do that? It's not like I can magically make myself not aware of whether I'm lying or not.”
              “You need to confuse your body's natural responses, until your behavior is so messed up that it fully disconnects from them. Start by picking a set of behaviors and always use them. For example, when making a play, look straight at me, regardless of what you played or said you played. When this is easy for you, start mixing it up. One game, look at people every time, whether you lie or not and the next always look away, even when you tell the truth. Your opponents won't be able to predict your reaction and, in time, neither will you. “
               “Thank you for explaining, Essem,” said Alice politely, even as she winced from what was clearly the onset of a headache. “I hope I find this very useful.”
              “You will for sure. This doesn't just apply to card games. When you're at a party, you can't be too eager for a guy to choose you. People might think you need the money badly.” Or have a depraved emotional attachment to him, she thought angrily to herself. “And that would be very bad, not only for your image but for that of everyone around you. Always remember that whatever one person does spills over to affect the brothel as a whole.” She cringed as she realized she’d just said one of Elissa’s favorite slogans without realizing it.
               “I'll never forget that,” Alice replied with intense earnestness. Rachel felt an uncomfortable twinge at the eager look on Alice's face and wondered vaguely why she was parroting back all these principles of deception and responsibility to the greater good which she so hated and despised. Then, it occurred to her that, somewhere inside, she, in fact, wanted Alice to succeed, if for no other reason than to get her, and all the other girls, to stop bothering her. Traditional values were fine, as long as they helped her instead of screwing her over. But she couldn't help wishing there was a way to help Alice without making Elissa and her ilk so happy. Making Alice happy was fine. Despite her irritating tendencies, Rachel was forced to reluctantly admit she was rather coming to like her.
              “There's another side to this,” she went on. “Just like when playing cards, you can't lie too hard. As Corpro likes to say 'Any information you choose to share with prospects is on a strictly need to know basis. Keeping them guessing will only pump up your mystery factor.' If you try too hard, guys might see through your front and wonder what you're trying to hide, maybe even come up with a worse explanation than the true one. Or, they may find your exaggeratedly distant behavior off putting, whether they fall for it or not and...”
              Rachel was interrupted by the sound of the door sliding open behind her back and she felt herself bristle at the accursed lack of privacy in her life. Even if the rooms had had locks, Rachel strongly suspected that hers would have been deactivated because she needed to be “monitored” for her “own good.” Her temper did not improve at all when she turned around and saw the person in the doorway was Elissa herself. “What do you want?” she asked sharply. Yes, there could certainly be far worse things than explaining to Alice how to lie.
               “We just received a call asking for you,” Elissa replied. “You have an appointment tonight so be ready at seven. Pick up is at seven-fifteen, precisely.” There was nothing particularly nasty about her tone but Rachel could not take much comfort from that. She had a job right now and was, therefore, useful. Elissa's concern was only for the money Rachel could make, not for Rachel herself.
               “Was there anything else I needed to know?” She asked, keeping her tone neutral with difficulty
              “No, that was the whole message.” Elissa turned on her heel and walked back out.
               “Close the door behind you,” Rachel called after her, but Elissa was already gone, so Alice got up and quickly scurried over to push the button that slid the panel closed. There was no question of playing more cards. Rachel was now in a bad mood because of Elissa and, anyway, she had to start getting ready soon. She got up and went over to the clothing dispenser to start looking for an outfit. But, as she placed her hand on the control panel, it suddenly came to her that something was happening far worse than being peeved by Elissa, something so bad that she forgot all about what she was doing. She felt her throat lock up and her stomach turn. She had just been called out for the evening, something that had not happened since her return. She was going to be expected to sleep with someone and, at that thought, her insides began to heave and she had to put her hand on the wall to support herself. Her heart raced and she felt her chest go tight around it. But who could have asked for her? She hadn't actually made a great show of herself, or even really gone outside that much. In fact, she hadn't even had any kind of positive interaction with a guy...except Dave. 

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  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 1
  •  The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 2
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 3
  •  The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 4 
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 5 
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 6  
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 7 
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 8    
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