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The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 21

 
               “We are are proud to bring you the halftime score for the hockey game between Le Meat Big and S.S.R.Inc,” announced the speaker on the radio at the super maglav platform where Rachel was waiting a few days later. “By the end of the second quarter Le Meat Big leads by twelve points. Impressive, but this is still anybody's game, especially now that S.S.R.Inc's star player Richard Middle Manager is back from rehabbing the torn shoulder he suffered earlier in the season. If he keeps it up like this, he'll be a new Brachium Fortis any day now. But Le Meat Big would really like to take this one home. S.S.R.Inc has had something of a target on their backs ever since their surprise big win against Fashion Brigade two weeks ago. Stay tuned to find out what happens and don't forget the terms of the game. The loser will pay a penalty of half off their entire inventory for the next twenty four hours. We'll be back with an updated score shortly after play resumes but in the meantime...” The final words of the announcement were drowned in the sudden woosh of the super maglav rushing up and then settling onto the overhead cables above which its suspension box hovered during transit.
              Stepping onto the public transport alone that morning, Rachel had felt odd. It was true there was no way an outsider looking at her could tell she was now an independent woman, a money card carrying house pet, but she still felt like it was written all over her. Yes, she had been a house pet before, but, when she lived with Esteban, she had rarely gone out alone, instead choosing to sit around the house moping, on the off chance he wanted her. Rachel fumed in disgust at the memory. At the very least, she could have obtained some digi-books to read and gotten some education so the time would not have been utterly wasted. Besides, things were very different now. She was much freer than a normal house pet both because she had won life-long hOwnership and because of her special relationship with Dave in which he allowed her to come and go at will, refusing to make demands on her time. A group of girls from Urban's was sitting in the back of the transport, all buzzing about the latest news concerning Gregory's recent plant purchase and Luther's “secret” plan to surpass them, and Rachel was amazed by how calm she felt in what was normally a horribly tense situation. Only gradually did it dawn on her that the number of plants owned by Gregory's had absolutely no effect on her now. She felt a rush of wonder, as if she were lighter than air. Then, it was gone and the loud chatter of the girls from Urban's was no more to her than the faint buzzing of an electrical circuit. Pulling a digi-book out of her purse, Rachel began to read in the unexpected tranquility, not lifting her face from the book until she reached the stop opposite the station.
               After the maglav had docked it took her very little time to locate Susan since her lime green traveling suit and matching crocodile print leatherette suitcase could be spotted halfway across the station. Rachel called out and waved her hands and Susan came running to meet her, her suitcase zipping along at her heels, almost like some small robotic dog, the kind that sometimes showed up in old “futuristic” cartoons. If the company Dave was working with did ever get around to making them, she guessed Susan would be one of the first in line to get one.
               “Rachel, did you spy in the computer?” Susan teased. “How did you know I was coming?”
               “Because I arranged it,” Rachel replied, but with only a shadow of the expected grin. “A lot has happened while you were gone,” she said in a much lower voice.
               “I can imagine, considering the insane bet you made.”
               “Oh, the bet is the least of my issues now,” said Rachel with a bitter edge to her voice. “But where were you?” she asked, making an effort to reach outside her own troubles.
               Susan made a gagging motion. “I was teaching, again, at a brothel in Punthage, I hate that word,” she began.
               “So it was a legitimate assignment?” asked Rachel in some surprise, turning to walk back to the transport spot.
              Luther’s was getting paid, if that's what you mean. But I can tell you that brothel was not legitimate, even if the job was. Not a one of them could give a proper hand job. We should have saved ourselves the trouble and sold Alice to them. They would have been happy to get her too. Thanks so much for rescuing me from that sewer of incompetence. I fail to see why I had to go anyway. As I said, Alice could probably have taught them.”
               “Alice is why you were sent,” said Rachel in a cold voice as boarded the waiting saucer. “Elissa wanted to deprive me of your help so I would lose the bet, and now she's...”
               “Well, how do you like that?” Susan burst out in anger, ignoring the rest of Rachel's statement. “Putting her personal feelings first? She would lose all clout in the brothel or could even be expelled for trying to sabotage something like this. We'll confront her and give her a piece of our mind just as soon as we get home.” Susan's face went bright pink as it usually did when she was angry or excited.
               “No, Susan. 'We' shall do no such thing,” said Rachel quietly. “Because, you see, we're not going to arrive home together. Luther's isn't my home anymore.”
               Susan looked confused for a moment, then she broke into a broad grin. “David, isn't it?” she crowed in triumph. “I knew it I knew it.”
               “Do not taunt the Demon.” Rachel drew back her lips and bared her teeth in a snarl. “Anyway, it's not what you think. He did it, not for himself, but to protect me from having to sleep with other men against my will.” Quickly, and without pride, Rachel explained to Susan what had happened. She didn't want to dwell on the situation with Dave which she honestly found rather embarrassing, instead feeling impatient to tell Susan about Alice and make sure Susan was on her side.
               “That...is...incredible,” said Susan in awe.
               “It's not as wonderful as you might think,” said Rachel dryly. “Because of this, Elissa decided...”
               “Wait, wait.” Susan waved her hands. “No more new information yet. I'm still trying to process what you told me. Lifelong hOwnership you said?”
              “Yes, I did say.” Rachel ground her teeth in frustration. To her utter disgust, Susan insisted she explain the minutia of the contract over and over again, while Susan oohed and ahhed over every bit. With a sick sensation, Rachel felt the transport begin to lower to the ground. As Susan got up and began to move to the door, Rachel grabbed her arm and pulled her back. “Listen to me,” she cried frantically. “Elissa claimed that my leaving the brothel invalidated the agreement and tried to throw Alice out. I don't think she succeeded but, anyway, Alice believes that was my intent and hates me now.”
              “I see,” said Susan with a queer expression.
              “Please help me,” Rachel whispered, but Susan was gone without answering. Rachel wasn't even sure she had heard her.
              Two days later, Rachel sat in Dave's transport, feeling again like she was going to be sick. Would Alice still be inside and would she come out? If she did, that might be worse. Alice could glare at her coldly for the entire party or turn up her nose in contempt and Rachel felt her stomach lurch at the thought while her fingers dug into the cloth of the seat. Regaining her self-control, she forced her hands to relax their grip. She didn't want to puncture the seat cover so Dave would have to take the trouble of having it repaired. She blushed faintly, reminded of how wonderful he was, the warmth of his kiss against her neck as he said farewell, his eyes smiling down at her as he brushed back a strand of hair deliberately left loose from her elaborate up sweep and whispered in his meltingly rich voice, “We’ll be together again in just a few hours. Best of luck. No matter what happens, my feelings about you won’t change.”
              The transport settled to the ground with a slight jolt, startling Rachel out of her reverie. She had become so wrapped up in her thoughts that she had not realized she had arrived. She rose, straight and stiff, and walked grimly towards the door, touching the opening button with a gesture of grace and disdain. The door slid open, revealing gray paving, soaked with swiftly falling rain drops sponsored specially by the Taranburgh Steel company in honor of the event. There was a stirring in the doorway of Luther’s and Rachel felt her breath strangle in her throat. They were coming! A large, brightly colored umbrella emerged from the door, then moved to the side and was followed closely by another. Susan walked beneath one umbrella, her hair piled on top of her head in a towering spiral. She looked magnificent in a flashing diamond necklace and a silver-black dress that left little to the imagination. Behind her, Alice tottered along on her unfamiliar silver heels.
               Despite her fear and bitterness, Rachel caught her breath in awe at the sight. This was the first time Alice had been permitted to lay aside the dull clothes of a new hire, make herself up, and style her hair. She wore a gown of shining white silkone cloth, edged with silver embroidery in a pattern of curling vines. The skirt reached to her ankles with only the tiniest of slits to allow her room to walk. The neckline cut across her body in a diagonal, leaving her left shoulder and arm bare, but the right sleeve went all the way down to the wrist and the bare left arm was balanced by a delicate white glovelet on her left hand. She wore no jewelry except for a simple circlet: a single large diamond on a slender fillet and her hair coiled in roles over her ears. Her make-up was soft and delicate, her eye-shadow of pearly pale blue and her eyes carefully outlined to make them look huge and frightened. Further, careful highlighting and shading had been used to make her cheeks look hollow and her face long and thin. Behind her floated a hover basket carrying an oddly shaped item, wrapped in plaZtic to protect it from the rain, which, after a second, Rachel realized was Alice’s harp.
               Once she had gotten over the initial shock and, admittedly, relief that Alice was actually going to attend the party, Rachel felt a sullen coldness spread through her. Alice looked magnificent. Susan and whoever had helped her, had done an excellent job. But it wasn’t right. Rachel had been Alice’s mentor, the one who had guided and watched over her. It was her duty, her right, to be the one who prepared Alice for her coming out of the closet. She should have been there to see Alice’s beauty emerge, most likely shaping that emergence with her own skillful hand on the make-up brush, to see the wonder and delight grow in Alice’s too long haunted eyes as she finally saw her potential. The chance for the special intimacy resulting from the sharing of last-minute privacy and holding out the hand of comfort was gone from her forever, taken from her by the malice of Elissa which no triumph or revenge could ever restore. Rachel felt her throat close and feared she might cry. With grim determination, she gripped the sharp edge of the door so the physical pain snapped her mind away from her emotional pain.
               Now, the two women had reached the steps up to the transport, entering one at a time with long pauses for closing the umbrellas. Susan gave Rachel a polite greeting and she nodded in response. Though she had warned Susan about Elissa’s treachery and Alice’s coldness on the ride back from the super maglav station, her speech had been hasty and their minds distracted by other concerns so it had been hard to tell exactly where Susan’s sympathies lay. Besides, other people at Luther’s could have influenced her afterwards. Rachel kept her face neutral to defend against possible enmity. One look at Alice made it plain that her feelings had not mellowed. Her eyes were hard and icy, almost glassy, her face drained of blood and her mouth stiff and formal. However, this only made her look more shy and modest than ever. They took their seats with a strict sense of propriety, all spaced evenly, so neither like nor enmity was displayed, then sat in silence, looking uneasily at the walls and floor. Rachel flipped a switch so that most of the walls and ceiling turned clear, allowing them to pretend they were distracted by looking out the windows, a ruse Rachel herself took maximum advantage of.
               Someone else turned on the radio to cover the awkward stillness with what turned out to be a story about some malfunction on the space elevator, far too technical for any of them to understand, of course. Apparently, there had been some casualties but only low level workers, mostly unprofitables, so no one they would have known. Rachel noted the news report mentioned the algae tanks were unharmed but most women, including, she was sure, Susan and Alice didn't understand their importance in the first place and so wouldn't have been worried. Instead, Susan was excitedly pointing out that their host might be able to get a lucrative repair job out of this and so might be in a particularly good mood. The party was a small gathering in an office. A wealthy businessman from the Taranburg steel company was showing off for some potential clients, though not from any of the companies affected by the malfunction as it had only just happened, a perfect scenario for a coming out of the closet party as it seemed best not to frighten Alice with large crowds or the intimacy of a private home. As they sank into the docking bay on top of the steel welding plant, Rachel wished she could say something to comfort Alice. She looked so utterly terrified. 

 

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  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 1
  •  The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 2
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 3
  •  The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 4 
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 5 
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 6  
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 7 
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 8   
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 9
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 10   
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 11 
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 12 
  • The Whore of Her Babylon--chapter 13
  • The Whore of Her-Babylon--chapter 14 
  • The Whore of Her-Babylon--chapter 15 
  • The Whore of Her-Babylon--chapter16 
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